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A gleaming new iPod rests upon your desk.
You turn it on, selecting
The Cicada Song. The battery is dangerously low,
but the harsh bass guitar
slices through your train of thought,
and you remember

A grunt. A slight cry.
You walk down the street, head bobbing to familiar lyrics.
“Tonight I have decided that there’s only one way out…”
Rounding a corner to walk down an ominous alley,
eyes widen in surprise.
A broad-shouldered man with sunken knuckles
hunches over a battered, bloody man
with a freshly-broken nose.
Crimson liquid coats the bigger man’s fists.
He looks up,
grimacing as he sees you,
and pulls out a gun.
The muzzle is pointed at beaten flesh.
He speaks to you: “Hand over the iPod and he lives.”
You rip earbuds from your ear canals frantically,
thrusting the music device at the man with the gun.
He grins. “Idiot.”
A finger twitches.
The trigger is pulled.

The music cuts off, pulling you from your thoughts.
You glance at the screen of your new iPod
just as a final message fades:
“Not enough battery power remains.
Please connect device to an external power source.”
©2008-2009 ~fewrevelations
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Just a poem idea put to paper.
I got the inspiration watching my iPod battery die while I listened to Autopilot Off. The last song of theirs on my playlist was The Cicada Song, and it seemed to fit...

Here's the full lyrics to The Cicada Song, for those of you who are interested...

Tonight I have decided that there's only one way out
And I tried so hard to fight it, but the blame kept coming down!
Nowhere to hide
You were always way too strong
Out in the night
As cicadas sing their song
Tell me, are you listening?
Because no one hears a thing
Tonight I have decided that there's only one way out!
And I tried so hard to fight it, but the blame kept coming down.
And I've got a torrid story, but there's no one I can tell!
I don't know if there's a Heaven, but I'm sure that there's a Hell
I feel the knife
Like the first time breathing in
Come to life
Like we'll never be again
Tell me, are you listening?
Cause no one hears a thing
Tonight I have decided that there's only one way out
And I tried so hard to fight it, but the blame kept coming down!
And it led me right where your heart should have been
And it was the last thing you saw, was it in?
I feel the knife
Like the first time breathing.
Tonight I have decided that there's only one way out!
And I tried so hard to fight it, but the blame kept coming down
And I've got a torrid story, but there's no one I can tell!
I don't know if there's a Heaven, but I'm sure that there's a Hell.
Out in the night, the cicadas sing their song!
Out in the night, the cicadas sing their song!
~"The Cicada Song" by Autopilot Off
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That's interesting.
I really like it. :)
Thanks. :D
I think it's the darkest thing I've ever written, but oh well...

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I like the sailing teaming.
Well, it's true that the moon could pull it back far away from me.
I like the orphan sea.
Well, we were never invisible but I guess that we cannot see:
We'll get crushed by the ocean
But it will not get us wet.
~Modest Mouse
Thing is, this probably happens to, esp when really new/expensive models come out.

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If revenge is sweet, and a dish best served cold-
does that mean revenge is Ice Cream?

Like my avvie, want one? Go here- [link] for 20 free avvies you can have.
Yeah...
To think, I got the whole idea by staring at the screen of an ipod that can't even have /movies/ on it!

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I like the sailing teaming.
Well, it's true that the moon could pull it back far away from me.
I like the orphan sea.
Well, we were never invisible but I guess that we cannot see:
We'll get crushed by the ocean
But it will not get us wet.
~Modest Mouse
wow

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If revenge is sweet, and a dish best served cold-
does that mean revenge is Ice Cream?

Like my avvie, want one? Go here- [link] for 20 free avvies you can have.
I know.

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I like the sailing teaming.
Well, it's true that the moon could pull it back far away from me.
I like the orphan sea.
Well, we were never invisible but I guess that we cannot see:
We'll get crushed by the ocean
But it will not get us wet.
~Modest Mouse
Yeah... that brick of an ipod you own.
I like this though. Very cool.

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Live Life You Have Plenty Of Time To Be Dead
Don't make fun of it just because it's big and clunky! /Some/ people might say that's very hypocritical of you! (although it would be a very rude lie...)
Thanks. ^^

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I like the sailing teaming.
Well, it's true that the moon could pull it back far away from me.
I like the orphan sea.
Well, we were never invisible but I guess that we cannot see:
We'll get crushed by the ocean
But it will not get us wet.
~Modest Mouse
wow :clap: very nice!!!

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He died for me so I live for Him. If you don't appreciate that, that is your perrogative, but please don't judge what you don't understand.
Thank you :D

It's rather funny. All my most popular works, I like the least...

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I like the sailing teaming.
Well, it's true that the moon could pull it back far away from me.
I like the orphan sea.
Well, we were never invisible but I guess that we cannot see:
We'll get crushed by the ocean
But it will not get us wet.
~Modest Mouse

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